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Lust's Labours Lost


Outline: Inspired by Spiderbaby's 'Lost' over on Free Poetry
Lust's Labours Lost

Lost in loveless lust
And filled with angst
We searched

Then finding our love
Pure as white dove
We slept

Waking to the sound
Of whispers fond
We rose

Violet eyes smiled
And for a while
We loved

Until a new thought
Cold with black doubt
We split

Now we lick our wounds
Alone unfound
We hurt

mad lemur

[Mon Jan 23, 2006 1:46 pm]

Pure magic.

Not original in conntent but so much said with so few words.


Lovely.

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Ron

[Mon Jan 23, 2006 2:43 pm]

Shocked Wow! Thanks Very Happy

Glad I hit the spot Cheers

Ron
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mad lemur

[Mon Jan 23, 2006 3:21 pm]

Shocked

No, behave, lemur. Just...behave...


Laughing
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Robb Hinge

[Mon Jan 23, 2006 9:16 pm]

Brief and to the point, but it's all there! No waffle, just the facts! Excellent!


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Ron

[Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:37 am]

Why, thank you, Robb, praise indeed! Happy New Year, buddy Very Happy

Cheers
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obrien89

[Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:24 pm]

the phrase short but sweet come to mind. a brillent piece.

dan

The reviewer would appreciate your comments on: What i should have done.
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Ron

[Wed Jan 25, 2006 11:27 am]

Hi Dan, nice to meet you,

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Love can be cruel to you if you get it wrong.

Good luck,

Cheers

Ron
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