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The Anti Room

There have to be spirits here...

If we are good
But find this life hell,
God in his Wisdom
Must send us to Heaven;

If we are bad
And find this life heaven,
God in his Wisdom
Must send us to Hell;

But, if we are good
And find this life heaven,
God in His Mercy
Must let us remain;

And if we are bad
And find this life hell,
God in his Wisdom
Should leave us right here.

I see both heaven and hell here.
When I die,
I will stay,
Undecided,
In the Anti Room
In limbo
Just as here...
ososment
[Fri Jan 20, 2006 1:05 pm]
not so much a comment about the poem but the interesting catch line... what's this about your dad knocking on the door?
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I wish I was from another planet, the Earth aint bad, just the bastards on it.
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Firecrest
[Mon Jan 23, 2006 1:20 am] Anti Room
Who knows if this philosophy is right or wrong.
No-one has ever come back to tell us.
When asked about heaven or hell, I just say, well, I have friends in both places.
Actually, I think that heaven and hell are here on Earth.
We make our own Heaven and Hell.


Firecrest

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Firecat
[Tue Jan 24, 2006 10:30 pm]
FC, I agree with you entirely! Hug
Thankyou for looking in.
FC.
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battyboo
[Wed Feb 01, 2006 3:56 pm]
this is very very deep
an interpretation of life
that is the most logical yet...

we do create our own hell

the right path and wrong path are marked out for us...

but we chose how we mold our destiny...
the paths are marked out
but the choice to go left or right is our own...

excellent
very deep
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*life isnt as bad we'd like to think...take of your darkglasses, and try a shade of tinted pink...itz so much prettier..

..not quite jaded, but customized illusion fairly intouch with reality Smile*
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Firecat
[Wed Feb 01, 2006 8:04 pm]
Thanks, Bee. Wink
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Tsunami
[Sun Feb 05, 2006 10:00 am]
My Rector (an old-fashioned word for a vicar), who tends to have his head in the clouds, once told us there are mainy paths up the mountain to heaven... Wink
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