Tickling Friends

Roy · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 4:46 pm]

Excellent Ron, and a worthy ambition too. To tickle (mentally, I assume), to amuse and make new friends comfortable and welcome.

I like the clever way you've employed the repetitive form that could so easily seem trite to express a really quite important idea with such an appropriately light-hearted touch.

The reviewer would appreciate your comments on: Omnimpotent
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Ron · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 5:22 pm]

Roy,

I was being totally triteless - thanks for picking up on that.

You have an eye for the subtle Wink

Ron
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". . . and in the end the love you take is equal to the love you make." - The Beatles

Bedford [<16] · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:06 pm]

You'll get no argument from me...............well not today anyway. Axe me tomorrow innit. Very Happy

(I have no eye for the subtle) Rolling Eyes

Ron · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:13 pm]

Aye, lad, I know, but I think you are supple in your bullshirting Wink

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". . . and in the end the love you take is equal to the love you make." - The Beatles

Bedford [<16] · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:18 pm]

Pat Answers will get you nowhere...............but his brother now he's a taxi driver will supply as soon as herd. Wink

Ron · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:24 pm]

Yeah, I know... I was in his cab... we made a deal... I said, 'If you stop I'll give you a tip.' He said, 'Deal' and I said, 'Get an effin licence.'
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". . . and in the end the love you take is equal to the love you make." - The Beatles

Sammy-Sparkle · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:37 pm]

I'm going to get this printed on my doormat, Ron. The cheque's in the post. Laughing

Good stuff.

Ron · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 7:57 pm]

Oh, Sammy, thanks a lot... I love cheques... the Poles are quite funny as well iffyer buyum a vodka.

Cheers

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". . . and in the end the love you take is equal to the love you make." - The Beatles

Sammy-Sparkle · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:02 pm]

I'd rather drink it myself and get poleaxed. Laughing

Ron · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:11 pm]

I'd rather have a bottle in front of me than a frontal lobotomy Cheers

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". . . and in the end the love you take is equal to the love you make." - The Beatles

Bedford [<16] · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 8:27 pm]

Follow my example and you get both. Very Happy

Ron · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:13 pm]

Point taken, Bedford,

Nowt like bein subtle about it, eh? Laughing

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". . . and in the end the love you take is equal to the love you make." - The Beatles

deepthoughts · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:25 pm]

Lovely poem Smile

Nice and friendly

Bedford [<16] · [Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:27 pm]

I don't think the lobotomy took Ron I can nearly count to ten without fingers now....................course it was stupid to cut off all my fingers in the first place. Very Happy

Ron · [Thu Nov 24, 2005 11:43 am]

Cheers Steve,

Yeah, man, friendliness is most definately the key. I've been in some dangerous situations and the smile got me through.

Thanks for reading and understanding Wink

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Tickling Friends Outline: Some people are harder than others to convince, but all come over in the end. Tickling Friends Oh, how I love to tickle To titilate to enable A stranger to relax. Oh, how I hate to prickle To cause a mind to ignoble A well-meant paradox. Oh, how I love the subtle To flash in eyes at my table A new friend needs no axe.