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Bedford [<16] · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 6:00 pm]

I agree with the sentiment, though is ego a vice, will check my theology stash, (won't take long), as a poem it could be stronger as advice I'm sure its full of merit. G Luck Very Happy

Ron · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 6:41 pm]

Ego can lead to every Vice and end up as decadence and hauty behavior, Bedford,

An egotistical person can become a right pain in the ass Wink

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Ron · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 6:44 pm]

ps, recheck the outline Wink

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Sammy-Sparkle · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 7:14 pm]

Without feedback there is only Ego
The worst of all the Vices
So true, Ron. If people don't tell us we're either brilliant, average or crap, how will we ever know?
So listen to others and edit those commas
And where ye go so to does me go, Amigo.
Boom-boom.
Basil Brush couldn't have put it better. Laughing

I'll have to trawl through the archives to find your other poems now, this is interesting stuff.
Laughing

Is that Andy Gibb in the picture? Confused

Ron · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 7:22 pm]

Hey there, good buddy,

I owe you, also, a Guinness for dropping by again.

We must drink it together soon.

But you missed the point, mate...

Be my Editor and make yourself a better writer in the process Wink

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MummyPenguin · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:03 pm]

Hi Ron
Ego? What ego? Do women have one? It seems to go with male side in our family! Wink

Sammy-Sparkle · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:24 pm]

My ego won't let me be any better than I already am (am already?), Ron. It lives in a world of its own.
Crying or Very sad

Ron · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 8:51 pm]

Do women have egos, mp?

Laughing

You maybe a woman but you are most definitely a Human.

It's how we cope with Ego, not if we have one Smooch

Sammy,

Come wth me to Mars and you won't need an ego, but don't forget the Mars bars Cheers

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Ron · [Thu Nov 10, 2005 9:06 pm]

Blimey! I'm gonna tek my pint of Stella into the bedroom and watch my TV in there if no one can figure out what is wrong with the grammatically-wrong original poem.

Laughing

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Roy · [Fri Nov 11, 2005 12:12 am]

I guess it depends where you're going to, too.

Mi amigo

You Jane
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Ron · [Fri Nov 11, 2005 11:05 am]

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". . . and in the end the love you take is equal to the love you make." - The Beatles

Andmymare · [Fri Nov 11, 2005 7:12 pm]

Roy you ditz, you bit the hook I were goin after. Now I can't carp! Well, I too go down the pike, sometimes crappie, sometimes just an old trout. And Ron, thank you for clarifying that it is not having an ego which is a vice in itself, (although it does pinch like one). We don't want all your students goin' about trying to gouge their egos out. And, can we now call you "boom boom"? A name once reserved only for hockey players..
Andmymare and her voracious, ruthless pleasure-seeking Ego Fish

Ron · [Mon Jan 23, 2006 1:15 pm]

Andmymare · [Mon Jan 23, 2006 1:55 pm]

Boy, when I lose you, I really lose you! Wink

I don't know why you didn't get alerted, but hmmm, have you checked your night sky for black holes lately?
To recap, Roy beat me to the punch on "too", but it was my ego that made me point that out just now. And, looking back, waaaay back, I agree with Fedbord that this is an alright poem, with great advice.
As for "And Ron, thank you for clarifying that it is not having an ego which is a vice in itself, (although it does pinch like one).", buh, just a rephrasing of your "It's how we cope with Ego, not if we have one".
Whatta time warp. I see you made it back from the bedroom whence you had fled with Stella.
Andmymare, heigh ho, you're funny in retrospect as well (and wise)

Ron · [Mon Jan 23, 2006 4:00 pm]

Think I'll take Stella back into the bedroom again... she seems to have done the trick last time Very Happy

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Feedback Outline: A fishing trip Without feedback there is only Ego The worst of all the Vices So listen to others and edit those commas And where ye go so to does me go, Amigo. Boom-boom.