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Turning Point


Outline: Written after the loss of Chris, a good friend and a good man.
A poem to John Meacock, and All who have dreamt of Sibson Skies

Turning Point

Staring down at patchwork fields
upon the face of God's green Earth
where tiny towns of matchbox houses
dot a landscape wide in girth.

Feeling power through soles of feet
of engines that can drive a dream
and vibrate flesh as alloy screams
through clear blue sky to lift the team.

Sensing fear of failure ripe
in eyes of introverted sight
and knowing that one slip in flight
could cost the round or end a life.

Flying dive within one's mind
in last-ditch hope of finding will
to turn that point that all before
have failed to turn through lack of skill.

Calming heart-rate; breathing deep;
jump-run tension nears its peak.
Stepping forward; locking grips;
tailgate exit not for meek.

Leader calling all to flight
into a bright and dazzling blue
that stuns with light to banish fright
of failing something new.

Slipstream roaring in one's ears
as aircraft shrinks and disappears
while deep inside the falling fears
are lost to dreams as first point nears.

Star-burst opens all around
ten thousand feet above the spot
where watching eyes are marking score
and rivals hope you'll miss your slot.

"Perfect speed is being there!"
not speed of sound or blistered air,
when all eyes lock without a care
in tight formations built from dare.

Seeing eyes upon one's face
as star-burst breaks for transit phase
and watching bodies turn in space
with practised ease and synchro'd grace.

Willing up from deep within
the skill to turn without a spin
and knowing that the line is slim
'tween those who lose and those who win.

Relativity slowing time,
Einstein's clock has lost its chime
and freefall wind is stretching face
as gravity speeds-up the race.

Slow-mo' turns in high-speed fall
with all eyes locked as Blue Skies call aloud.
Then turn that point that those before
had failed to turn and all are proud.

Screams are lost in slipstream blast
and never mind that we came last by far;
on the ground a cheering crowd of experts
owe us this round in the bar!

Wide horizon's distant line
marks the boundary of time where Man is split,
and those who walk can never know
why those who fly can never quit.



Photo by Stuart Meacock

sravasti

[Sun Jul 10, 2005 1:46 pm]

Dear Ron,

A most beautiful, sad poem, but what a tribute. I think we often forget or don't realise that

"the line is slim
'tween those who lose and those who win."

I also read the last verse with many meanings in terms of how to live life.

annie
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Ron

[Sun Jul 10, 2005 3:43 pm]

Thanks, annie,

Chris was our pilot. He flew a Shorts Skyvan - 21-man jump-ship, a big bugger in skydiving circles.

One Christmas he was flying my mates at a 'Boogie' at Ampurabrava in Spain when he crashed into trees following an aborted landing Crying or Very sad

I wrote the poem for his dad, John, who is a Hero of mine.
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Andmymare

[Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:16 pm]

Ron,
I looked up the skydivers specific,
and besides in your poem, you have succeeded, in bringing the reader right there, with the blasting air and adrenaline and howling cameraderie not to mention the mighty rush
and also as Sravasti Annie said,

" Wide horizon's distant line
marks the boundary of time where Man is split,
and those who walk can never know
why those who fly can never quit."

that is pluperfect perfect.
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Ron

[Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:23 pm]

Go try one Wink

Better than sex Shocked

Laughing
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Andmymare

[Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:28 pm]

You're supposing a great deal there,
lol erm,
nah the closest I ever got was hang-gliding; and there I was doing it to get a story; the very light hang-glider felt like a ton to me, I could only manage to get so far as a sling, and a coupla mind-numbing classes on wind shits and thermodynamics.
nah nothing like you had there, and have here in this.
Still, check your information.... Rolling Eyes LOFL
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Ron

[Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:40 pm]

Andmymare wrote:
and a coupla mind-numbing classes on wind shits and thermodynamics.


Erm... I take it you did mean wind-shift and thermals, eh? Wink

Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Andmymare

[Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:52 pm]

ahm, yes but that's what I call them.
I still get off on watching hawks ride thermals, because I know what they're doing. Anyway I dreamed of flying before I ever flew in a plane, so I know it goes beyond specie memory.
Having said that about the hawks, I am a lousy windsurfer. Possibly why I refer to wind shifts as I do.
Razz
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Ron

[Sun Jul 10, 2005 10:00 pm]

Skydivers are birds. That's why I used to do it. Fell in love with birds as a kid and became one as an adult... for a while.

By the way, no problem with heavy weights in freefall... in freefall you are weightless Wink

cya tomorrow Wink
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Andmymare

[Mon Jul 11, 2005 2:15 am]

Well Ron who's gonna use "in free-fall you are weightless"....c'mon stop me before I write again....lol
good evening.
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Ron

[Mon Jul 11, 2005 12:30 pm]

Goooooood Morrrrninnnnnng Verrrrrmont!

'Stop you before you write again'...?

Are you bonkers or what? I would never be able to sleep if I did that! Wink

Speaking of weightlessness... did you know that at Terminal Velocity one can manouvre in air simply by altering the angle of your hands in the slipstream...? Try it. Stick your hand out of the car window when you're on the Freeway and feel the forces on your hand as you alter its angle to the wind Wink

Ciao baby
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Ron

[Mon Jul 11, 2005 2:12 pm]

Check this...

The Captain

It's what got me jumping in the first place and my current Avatar was taken on that day... Wink

Love

Ron
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Andmymare

[Mon Jul 11, 2005 5:33 pm]

Ron, first off, when I'm in a certain frame of mind, everything inspires...but yer beginning to speak poetry..."did you know that at Terminal Velocity one can manouvre in air simply by altering the angle of your hands in the slipstream"....yes I play with my hand out the window all the time lol...
second, I read your non-fiction piece and it is wonderful and funny....yes!! THAT is what it is to find a love...THAT is what it is to find the sweet spot....THAT is what it is to find exactly where you belong....
I completely believe you Ron, but I may have to find my sky somewhere else....tell me, do people scream out in ecstasy or is that too swept away by the wind....just wondering....
you are full of it aren't you....now pardon me, I just got hornswoggled onto an Irish page....
Somersault
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Ron

[Mon Jul 11, 2005 5:52 pm]

Laughing I always did... and still do... shout, "Yaaaaahhhooooo!"

What do you shout? Confused

Tell me after you've astounded your Hornswagglers - the liddle divvils, them... bighorra an' bejaizus!


Laughing
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PenJen

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 11:54 am]

Oh, I feel like I'm stumbling in on a 'take the Mick', eh?! Wink eye

I loved this peice, like peace, it was so atmospheric, visual, swift and beautifully described plus captured magic and risk with the 'slip-stream' to the 'star-burst' soaring, and yet appeared 'weightless', with a very melodic and even melcancholic air with it too. I seemed to b sitting watching from a wing somewhere. It is a very touching tribute.

Fly on, dear soul

Jen Peace
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Ron

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:11 pm]

Yaaaaahhoooooo!

Very Happy
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