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Did they?


Outline: Good conquers Evil
Did they think for just one second
In the end
That all their dreams went down
A twisted bend?
And once upon the other side
With open eyes
Did they realize the so-called lies
Did something else?
And forced a peace in Africa
And Palestine
While men of plasticine still
Know not what they do?

Ian Gould

[Sat Jul 09, 2005 11:44 am]

Strong poem. Excellent words.
Ian
Peace
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Ron

[Sat Jul 09, 2005 11:55 am]

Peace to you too, Ian,

Love

Ron
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sravasti

[Sat Jul 09, 2005 1:49 pm]

Ron,

This is an excellent poem. I meant to reply to you yesterday when you wrote me, and will send you an email on the side.

I thought the last two lines were particularly gripping:

"While men of plasticine still
Know not what they do?"

It makes me think of how often, when we are stuck with our own view, we cannot understand anyone else's actions. But once we can dislodge being stuck in ourselves and start to look at why others might be doing what they are, it makes the grey areas for more complicated, and requires much more personal responsibility for our own actions thereafter.

annie
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Ron

[Sat Jul 09, 2005 2:01 pm]

As always, annie, you have this ability to see beyond the 'Headline' into a basic Truth which, with selfish thinking, is invisible.

Your eyes are wide open as is your mind.

All my love,

Ron
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Andmymare

[Sat Jul 09, 2005 10:02 pm]

Ron, a giant topic in a tiny space. Only thing that keeps me from hating wilfull ignorance, is the fact I have a blind spot. I can't see it for trying. Now see I've come up against the subject of your poem, and not bothered "critting" just thinking about what you said. Best kind.
Fond regards,
Andmymare
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Ron

[Sat Jul 09, 2005 10:17 pm]

hey, darlin',

...don't 'hate willful ignorance'... use that new-found 'Zen' of yours Wink to teach Very Happy

Smooch
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PenJen

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 11:42 am]

This started as if a personal reflection to then increase with such a surge of power and global comment - very striking and hit strong in its message and delivery. Has left me thinking and reeling... Thanks for this.

Jen Peace
x
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Ron

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:00 pm]

You're very welcome, Jen, thanks.

Such a shame that we still have to suffer sacrifice in order to do the right thing. Politics has been so cut-throat for as long as I can remember that I sometimes wonder if Mankind, on both sides of the table, will ever wake up and smell the coffee.

Hmm... anyone, from the 'other' side, fancy a coffee?

xxx
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PenJen

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:05 pm]

Well, home politics have a big day today - The Glorious Twelfth - and I'm just praying that there will be no trouble later... Rolling Eyes

And from the 'other' side as in across the pond - Aye, make it strong with a wee drop of milk. Tá! Zen
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Ron

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:07 pm]

I was thinking more in terms of Arab coffee, darlin' Wink
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PenJen

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:15 pm]

Well honey, me no been to bed yet and eyes are like stoned snookerballs. My erm... apologies... Embarassed

Think I'll fix me something stronger...
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Ron

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:20 pm]

Try Irish Coffee then Very Happy
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PenJen

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 1:31 pm]

Well, had the coffee and I'm Irish - will that count instead? Still too early for the other stuff... Angel
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Ron

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 1:47 pm]

Wink
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Ron

[Tue Jul 12, 2005 6:04 pm]

Any beautiful poets from here wanna comment on this on 'Non-Fiction'? Wink

Only For Oil

Bin Laden is not after the destruction of Western Civilisation, he is after control of the Ras Tanura refinery and every Well in Saudi Arabia!

That is why he attacks every ally of Saudi Arabia.

ARAMCO, the Saudi national oil company, is an acronym for ‘Arabian-American oil Company.

He is just a Bandit using God, falsely, to drag us into a state of terrified blindness while he sneaks in the back door and nicks the loot.

Stand tall…

Stand proud…

Hold your ground and OPEN YOUR EYES!
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