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pinktwirl · [Sat Apr 09, 2005 11:33 pm]

I think the poem of which you speak
Has played a game of hide and seek
And if you click on Pinktwirl's space
You will see it in its place.

For fear of posting too much writ
I trimmed my work a little bit
And in my pruning I did snip
Your lovely playful poetic quip

I'll reinstate it right away
From hide and seek its come to play
And I will leave it for ever more
For one and all to henceforth adore.

Pinktwirl x

RichBitch · [Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:17 am]

Oh I say,
play hide and seek?
more fun than I've had
all week

But with a poem?
Where'd we look?
on screen, or file
or in a book?

Firecat
I ask of you
write a 'pome'
about me too?
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I'm a nice girl really!! x

Firecat · [Sun Apr 10, 2005 3:40 pm]

I've been away, but now I'm home ~
I'd better write you both a 'pome'!
But not now, I'm afraid. The fact is
My son wants me for football practice. Crying or Very sad

Mmagic · [Mon Apr 11, 2005 10:38 am]

I have my fingers crossed for you,
That you have more luck this afternoo',
For while a lost poem is upsetting,
Being a football is worse I'm betting.

I enjoyed your ditty very much,
Keep writing - stay in touch,
Your work is enjoyed here, that's true
For not everyone is as talented as... me.

I mean, you.

Andrew

RichBitch · [Sat Apr 23, 2005 4:12 pm]

Oh Andrew is it really you
the one with hundreds of reviews
I read your poem and your page
so much talent; and at your age!

And Firecat, you find your pome?
did it find its way back home?
And when do we all see it pray?
maybe later on today?
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I'm a nice girl really!! x

battyboo · [Sun Oct 30, 2005 8:45 am]

hey
thatz really really nice
short and sweet
and if i find ur poem ill be sure to let u know..
throw me a topic
maybe i can write on it
and u can write another poem in response!? Smile

bee
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*life isnt as bad we'd like to think...take of your darkglasses, and try a shade of tinted pink...itz so much prettier..

..not quite jaded, but customized illusion fairly intouch with reality Smile

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rainbowtree · [Mon Oct 31, 2005 3:12 pm] **AHA**

Lovely write firecat!!!!!!
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The water runs of a ducks back, repelled by her waxy feathers.

SparroWyrm · [Fri Nov 04, 2005 5:55 pm]

awww lovely. Short and sweet and to the point, most enjoyable to read Smiley

Some nice responses too!
Although I could write a fun review in rhyme I'm too tired (and lazy) sorry Wink eye

Cool
jack
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"Tenderness and kindness are not signs of weakness and despair but manifestations of strength and resolution." - Kahil Gibran

Firecat · [Fri Nov 04, 2005 6:35 pm]

Wow! Thankyou one and all!
Maybe I ought to write more often? Confused

SparroWyrm · [Fri Nov 04, 2005 6:38 pm]

Looks that way to me...
With this sort of concise neat rhymage, you're on to a winner!
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"Tenderness and kindness are not signs of weakness and despair but manifestations of strength and resolution." - Kahil Gibran

strayshift · [Sat Nov 05, 2005 9:31 pm]

Yes this made me smile Firecat -
But I suspect
If checked it out
You'd find your poem
Has made for others - poems...

Good little piece sparked a lot here
Gordon

Firecat · [Sat Nov 05, 2005 10:33 pm]

Thanks, Jack and Gordon.
Jack... your picture... have you just changed gender? Good on you, Jacq! I can't say I blame you! Artist

SparroWyrm · [Sat Nov 05, 2005 10:35 pm]

LOL changed gender?
erm... I was and am a boy.. what did u think i was ! hahaha
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"Tenderness and kindness are not signs of weakness and despair but manifestations of strength and resolution." - Kahil Gibran

SparroWyrm · [Sat Nov 05, 2005 10:36 pm]

ps i do like cross dressing tho Wink eye

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"Tenderness and kindness are not signs of weakness and despair but manifestations of strength and resolution." - Kahil Gibran

strayshift · [Sat Nov 05, 2005 10:42 pm]

its his rocky horror thing... Wink

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Lost Outline: I've lost my poem! Someone's poem caught my eye. I wrote a poem in reply! Now I find that, to my cost, My little poem is, well, lost. So if you find it, please, do tell ~ I might write one for you as well!