Hello Goodbye (and repeat)

eternalsoul · [Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:25 am]

There is a slight humour to this write with a deep introspect. I enjoyed reading this, it's true a lot of our problems tend to come from inside us rather than outside us, which most of the time is easier to vent and release frustration. I'm glad you've identified that this is something that comes from within.

Thanks for sharing,

Amed.

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bitraker · [Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:22 pm]

very good - love how the metaphor (self-induced stupor) is in control in both an active and passive way - yet if it smashes the locks, is it still stupor?

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KeithB · [Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:06 pm]

It's great when a rant comes out like this. The sort of thing I write myself.

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Hello Goodbye (and repeat)

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Hello Goodbye (and repeat) Outline: Just venting Why: Arrrrrrrrrgh Ah damn it all through, It's caught me once more, This self-induced stupor - My destructive succour. I thought I had nailed it, Got it trapped in a box. Then when I'm not looking, It simply smashes the locks. But really I'm dodging The spark of the game: The sauce ain't the source, It's me that's to blame.