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Do you remember Minnie?


Outline: Been to so many funerals lately!
While death sucked out her last breath
And withdrew the light from her staring eyes
Family members perched round Minnie's bed,
Birds of prey twitching their restless beaks.

Time to swoop on her belongings
And sort and sift, grab and discard
Till all those sweet familiar articles
Were strewn in heaps and boxes.

"I'll have that", "Who wants this?"
They squabbled and tugged and spoiled.
And what was left was slung outside:
"Help yourself to what's left of Minnie's life."

That's all we are: a heap of stuff
Collected lovingly, left with regret,
And pilfered or thrown away
By our nearest and dearest.

We may live on in a teapot
Or a carefully starched piece of lace,
In a sepia print of a bygone wedding
Preserved in a family album.

Or we may live on in a thought.
Our bodies burned or rotted away,
Our stuff destroyed or gone,
Someone, one day might say:

"Do you remember Minnie?"
"Who?"

Shelley

[Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:03 am]

This is so sad. Poor old Minnie. Your poem hit a chord with me. Rose
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parisDramaqueen24

[Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:36 am]

I agree with Shelly on this one. It was nicely put. Becky zzzzz Very Happy
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JAM

[Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:41 pm]

'tis the sad-assed way of the world, Anonymouse. However, it need not be that way. You captured the essence of selfish thoughtlessness in this very well written piece. Cheers, I enjoyed it very much.
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Piya

[Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:44 pm]

Your poem reminded me of an old classic : Ripples in the bucket of life...A lovely comment on the ephemeral nature of existence....made me think....
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Anonymouse

[Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:34 am]

Thanks folk for passing this way. This was written in a moment of bitterness because this is what happens. I've seen such a lot of death recently with this lack of respect repeating itself endlessly. I wonder if it's better to have no-one round your death bed and no-one interested in your things! You are right, Jam, 'tis the sad-assed way of the world!
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Roy

[Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:00 pm]

Provocative poem, Anonymouse. Sad but true.

Remember when?
We knew her then,
but
then again
who did we know?

Remember her?
How close we were?
No; I'd prefer -
where did that go?

Remember now
and how, and how
time draws the plough
on all we sow.
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Anonymouse

[Thu Mar 05, 2009 9:22 pm]

How very true, Roy! And how well you put it.
Quote:
time draws the plough
on all we sow

I love that!
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