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If only that cabbage...


Outline: 60 word fiction
It began with a faint gurgling. What had he eaten for lunch? It was undoubtedly the Sauerkraut! The gurgling increased, becoming more insistent, creating a definite downward urge to release gas from the colon. This was definitely not the moment to let his wind go free... Helen's adoring gaze froze at his thunderous appreciation of the lunch they had shared.

Phots-Moll

[Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:46 pm]

Aaaw, how romantic Cupid
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brian boru

[Wed Feb 25, 2009 12:11 am]

60 words on a fart, its cause and immediate effect on romance requires a degree of expertise I do not appreciate. Easily and speedily forgotten.
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Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come.
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Anonymouse

[Wed Feb 25, 2009 1:02 am]

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought
I summon up remembrance of things past,
I blush as I recall - as blush I ought!
The consequences of that ill-timed blast!

Not so easily and speedily forgotten!
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Dragonfly

[Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:26 pm]

A whimsical piece? Graphically detailed. I did not like 'to let his wind go free'. Maybe release wind?
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Anonymouse

[Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:14 pm]

Whimsical as opposed to factual! I was drawing on the folk wisdom of the ancient saying: "Wherever you be, let your wind go free", as being less direct. "Release wind" is rather too graphic for what I intended. Thanks for flying by.
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