A poet's dream?

metman · [Fri Oct 31, 2008 2:36 pm]

It tickled me anyway Brian. Liked it.

scarletdancer · [Fri Oct 31, 2008 3:42 pm]

, this is so funny, Brian.

Clarissa · [Fri Oct 31, 2008 5:31 pm]

violetta · [Fri Oct 31, 2008 10:21 pm]

Quirky and awash with humour. I really liked this light relief.
Good one.
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carrieann · [Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:07 am]

This raised a smile, would prefer it as a straight gag, tho'.

BrianRobertNeal · [Sun Nov 02, 2008 5:48 pm] **Watto all**

Thanks for your time and comments.

Scarlet I know we all lie about our age but are you really under 18? (Scarlet has reverted to an old avatar)

Brian

Piya · [Tue Nov 11, 2008 5:00 pm]

Her BRN,brought me some much needed cheer.I think its brilliant Poet laurie Ate!truly smashing! Very Happy

BrianRobertNeal · [Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:03 pm] **Watto Piya**

Thanks for your review,

Brian

JAM · [Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:12 pm]

And you said mine had impish undertones. Well, this is full in-yer-face pythonesque humour at its best. I'm no expert at classic apostrophisation (is that a word), but shouldn't it be 'twas? Also pluaralisation (also might not be a word) of neighbour would still work. Also, "wife Kate" might be better as "missus Kate".
Excellent!
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JAM - Mooless tolerates nought... emphasis disguised as thought.

MummyPenguin · [Fri Feb 27, 2009 7:38 am]

Ouch - my only consolation is that if they were my neighbours they wouldn't have a very satisfying meal Laughing

Carol Kaiser · [Wed Apr 22, 2009 8:27 am]

Hi Brian,

BRILLIANT!

Smile

...I mean, who would have thought of that?
Well, certainly not me that's for sure. I do so envy all these people that are so damned clever with word play.

Carol.

BrianRobertNeal · [Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:55 am] **Watto All**

I'm so glad that this poem tickley youyr funny-bones. I have to admit that it still makes me chuckle.

So thank you all for your time and comments,

Brian

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A poet's dream? Outline: More sheer nonsense Why: Weakness of intellect Review: Any I'm not sure whether t'was fortune or fate To have covert cannibals as neighbour In the shape of Lawrence and his wife Kate. Surely a dream for wordsmith to savour Chance to become the Poet Laurie ate! Author Explanation: I've been under a lot of strain.