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The Madman Ouroborous.


Outline: What goes around... Comes around.
Why: fun
Review: any
THE MADMAN OUROBOROUS.



The madman is stalking
his prey for tonight
and he'll rant and he'll rage
and he'll scream out his bile
while his victim just waits
knowing nothing of the impending invectivity
to be poured out in scornful words
like droplets of poison
from the tongue of a snake
that has bitten its own tail

Oh, I could tell you a tale
a story or two about that snake
slithering through the cess
of its own arrogant and pompous words
falling like that chill sleet of invective
that fell but meant nothing...
Just an endless stream of bile
screamed from egotistical rage
for which I have no use tonight.
Tomorrow
I will do the stalking

Author Explanation: Maybe I should have clicked on the 'Psychology' button ?

scarletdancer

[Wed Apr 16, 2008 8:46 pm]

Hi Chris,

They should have a nightmare section lol. This poem is so aptly written of a snake. If they only knew what a pain in the butt they really are, but, ego won't allow them to. This is one of the best poems I have read of yours. A very thought provoking poem, concise, and meaningful to all those you have the misfortune of listening to their rants. Excellent. cheers, scarlet
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BrianRobertNeal

[Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:26 am] Watto Chris

"for which I have no use tonight."

Is your MC "blocked"?

Brian

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BrianRobertNeal

[Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:54 pm] Watto Chris

Forget the station please see

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Liliana

[Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:01 pm] Hello Chris!

Ooooooo.....er!! Peter Tatchell eat your heart out! (only kidding!) Love this cathartic rant! Great impact and loved the Serpentine imagery!

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Tnarg

[Fri Apr 18, 2008 5:38 pm]

Hi Chris,

Who on earth was this written about? Which politician? Which TV Evangelist? Which egotistical bullying boss? Does it really matter, it fits them all, a perfect rant and I cannot call it racist, I cannot call it anti religious, I cannot even call it sexist, however, as a member of the Society for the Advancement of Reptiles, Cobras, Adders, Snakes Total Intelligence Committee..............
Seriously, great stuff.
Cheers
Grant
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Ian Gould

[Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:08 pm]

When I think of Ouroborous I always think of an episode of Red Dwarf.

The snake bites it's own tail. The cycle continues. Repetition. Change that remains the same. Full circle. Hunted becomes hunter, hunter becomes hunted. The tables keep turning.

An enjoyable poem, spinning the coin. Heads or tails. Victim no longer.

Loved it.

Ian
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Chris Ripple

[Tue May 06, 2008 8:39 pm]

Why, thank you all for the 'pos' for what is a heavily allegorical tale (tail ?) of arrogance, betrayal and vengeance in that order. It was written after hearing the worst introduction to me going on stage at a folk club that I've ever experienced.
(Crap, rubbish, can't write etc... As if I care 'cos I'm still getting the gigs) and through my bloody P.A. as well.
I performed it in front of him two weeks later and he hadn't got a clue... Unlike a couple of the audience who had been at the previous gig... and I've never worked for the unprofessional twat since. I don't mind the insults but I totally object to the unprofessional conduct. Whyd'ja book me then, ya dickhead ?

Ouroborous... The Worm, for anybody who hasn't read E.R.Eddison's 1920's fantasy novel 'The Worm Ouroborous' certainly predates Red Dwarf but they probably got the episode off the back of it, as I did the poem.

For all those into Gothy or Hippie tat, you can buy the 'worm rings' at most junk jewellery stalls. If you ask for the 'Ouroborous' ring they probably won't have a clue so just pick up the snake biting it's own tail ring and start showing off your knowledge (then put it on your THUMB-Yes, really).

Sarcastic, Tnarg ? Nah, not me. Must be someone else, surely ?

Lil', Peter Tatchell eh ? You were soooo close. My personal revenge, and after its one live performance it went into the box.

P.S. The folk club failed after another month which personally I was sad about.
I hate to hear of venues closing. Even his.
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