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Armageddon There... But Slowly...


Outline: Your guess is as good as mine ?
Why: fun
Review: any
ARMAGEDDON THERE... BUT SLOWLY...




When church bells howl at midnight
and dawn breaks to greet the moon
you're offered public liability
on a miniature silver spoon
The watchtower's cracked and faded
as the storms of love increase
and you know you don't feel honour bound
to support the price of peace.

The ringmaster then cracks his whip
while Judas anoints his brow
where nothing's really happening
it's nearly over now
The riot squad is in decline
tho' once they were the best
and Clara and Benito hang
for not passing the test.

All actors in this pantomime
still give out all they had
while bandits on the celluloid
still practice smash and grab
A hymn of darkness then descends
to make you feel on high
but all you hear is hosts of angels
singing sweetly by and 'bye.

'And so to bed' cries Zebedee
and so to bed we go
leaving all who care for life itself
to scream 'It isn't so...'
and wolves now suckle infants
while the whores just babble on
as they turn to take your credit cards
but find the money gone.

The succubus pulls on his jeans
the cat digs up the bones
of those who never made the choice
who scream for death alone
and principles, dames and panto horses
all end much too soon
when church bells howl at midnight
and dawn broke to greet the moon.

Author Explanation: There is a note on my copy of this... 'Sometimes you write things and you haven't a clue as to why ? This started with the first line and continued 'till the last, two lines got re-written and one had the words changed around. The title including the pun was added later but the rest of them within were as written... What's it about ? Dunno... Strange or what ?'

bulldozer

[Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:34 pm]

Hi, Chris

A very good poem and a good write. Wink

Cheers

danny

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maipenrai

[Sat Jan 12, 2008 3:21 pm]

the best of yours that I have read Chris, good stuff mate.
Bernie
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Chris Ripple

[Sat Jan 12, 2008 10:49 pm]

Thank you Danny, and thank you Bernie... Er, I hesitate to ask since I wrote the blessed thing but have you any idea what it's about 'cos in all honesty it came to me out of the blue and I don't have a clue ?
I have three more of this sort of thing and so maybe I'll post 'em sometime ?
I just wish I knew what triggered them as all were written within a six month period and they've all been performed about three times each and then dropped from the set. This type of thing done live is so difficult to get people to listen to, but this was my favourite of the four.
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maipenrai

[Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:37 am]

Chris mate a hell of what I write comes from nowhere mate, but I am ok with that , once it's started let it run!!, see what comes out at the end.

Your into to music Chris, I had an old mate who used to do back up on guitar for Northern groups in the 60's/ 70's , 10 cc etc , god, what's her name, the girl who did "Pearls a Singer"

the guy wrote lyrics and he gave me the knowledge!

if you write lyrics/poems TRY to make each line, each stanza a " word picture", each line/stanza should be a picture in the mind of the reader.

I try in my own humble way to do that, try to create a written but visual picture, sorry to say I don't have a lot of joy.
Bernie
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Chris Ripple

[Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:18 pm]

Bernie, It's good advice you were given and I totally agree with it. Elkie Brooks was the lass in question. I've just thought... First time I saw her live she was in the band 'Vinegar Joe' with the late Robert Palmer doing the male vocals and that was thirty six years ago... Oh bloody hell !
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BrianRobertNeal

[Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:00 am] Watto Chris

(Once you've posted a "review" you can edit the script but not the "Would you read and review" request" The only thing you can do is to delete the request, post a 2nd review and then indicate the piece you actually want read.)

I have to admit that I didn't grasp what this is about still you've touched base with Bernie. I bet it's fun to "orate",

Brian

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