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In Quiet Dignity.


Outline: Written after the Tsunami tragedy for a benefit gig.
Why: because...
Review: any
IN QUIET DIGNITY.



Images flicker across the screen
golden sands, blue skies and trees of green
as people play on the beach and in the waves
exploring all the coves and caves...
Until time stood still.

Now new images flicker across the screen
where once played those who made this their holiday destination
now just scenes of total devastation
as humankind struggled to survive
and make some sense of what just happened to their lives

and yet...
In quiet dignity
those who lived through it ignore the rules
forced upon them by religion and nationality
and help by doing all they can
and share with all a sense of common humanity
that most of us will never share
a sense of loss without despair
a sense of kinship with all those affected there
as cameramen behind the scenes
seem struck dumb by what they've seen
There is no purpose
none at all
the sheer waste and devastation numbs us all
and there are no words that can be said
after witnessing so many dead
and dying and in distress
How can words do justice to this mess
This carnage...
This open wound ?

And yet...
With quiet dignity
the people who it most affected
go on with their lives
with a sense of fate...
a sense of karma...
a sense of what will be will be
as we go on watching flickering images
on a television screen
and faces turn to the wall
and quiet prayers are said
A tear runs slowly down a cheek
How does one grasp the sense of so many dead ?
When time stood still.

Author Explanation: While the scenes were unfolding my ex girlfriend and I got on the 'phone and rang a club owner to ask if we could arrange a benefit. Luckily, he was watching too. A month later we put on a benefit gig which raised just over a thousand quid. This was doubled by the Club's owner and doubled again by the local Sikh Temple. Sometimes you get it right. Now, with another poem stuck in between the third and fourth verses it has become part of our band's current set. This shortened version was picked for the Rhythms Of The World CD sampler for 2007.

BrianRobertNeal

[Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:51 am] Watto Chris.

Two poems on the same theme: yours and mine. Yours underlines the infinite suffering that has been caused and mine the sudden finiteness of the loss.

Brian

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