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The Soul Of Six Acre Wood.


Outline: I wrote it in the wood at 8.15am whilst sat on a tree trunk when I should have been working...
Why: fun
Review: any
THE SOUL OF SIX ACRE WOOD.



The wood like me is half awake
and not yet plugged in to the day
so that when it awakens
it wakes slower than you or I

The first flush of movement has ceased
and the early risers are now safely back
in their holes, nests or burrows
as the butterflies begin their nettledance
visiting all in the vicinity
and as the early morning sunshine
strikes the leaves
the wood shudders...
It is a physical, a tangible thing I can feel...
as if the wood has made it safely
through the night
and is just now flexing it's muscles
for the new day.

While we listen to the local residents
bickering in the topmost branches
the wood creaks and cracks and groans
coming slowly to life
waking from slumbering torpor
the sun dappling it's leaves
and the gnats and midges vie
for their first victim of the day.

Author Explanation: I dunno... I just walked into the wood one morning, looked around me, sat down and finished this in ten minutes... It's still as writ'.

bulldozer

[Thu Jan 10, 2008 1:28 am]

Hi, Chris

I liked this poem, a very read. Wink

Cheers

danny Very Happy

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maipenrai

[Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:27 am]

Hi Chris, liked this mate, good "word pictures", enjoyed the read.
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pamela

[Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:43 am]

Oh Chris, this is so lovely. You have transported me from a damp winter's day to the magic of a wood early on a summer morning. Your imagery is so vivid I can actually 'be' where you wrote this and experience the surroundings.

Thank you, Pam Very Happy
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metman

[Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:30 am]

Nice one Chris. I enjoyed it.
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Cadwallon

[Thu Jan 10, 2008 12:14 pm]

A refreshing thought and reminder about being in harmony and tune with nature.

Thanks for the inspiring read.
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scarletdancer

[Sat Jan 12, 2008 2:46 am]

Hi chris, this is such a visual poem, the woods coming alive in the morning. And the many creatures looking for food in its early morning awalening. What a pleasure to experienced this. A great write, I enjoyed the read. Excellent. cheers, scarlet Smile
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