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Author: Ron
Started: 18/09/07
Last Edited: 12/12/07
Published: 18/09/07
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Jimmy AngelOutline: First one to spot it names it. Review: Any comment welcome. Jimmy Angel
Jimmy Angel flew out of the West; skimmed a plateau clothed in cloud. Jungle treetops marked his height as his Fokker engine purred powerfully; the sound of unseen Destiny. Bush pilot-low, as only they can, an uncharted mountain range threatened his craft. To aft was his past where he'd learnt all his skill. He'd need that to avoid being killed. Prospecting for gold and the dreams that brings, who knows what was in the minds of all onboard? Eldorado, maybe. Devil’s Canyon, steep and sharp, old enough to weigh the price of any man’s mettle to settle the matter in the blink of an eye. Careful now, careful in the cloud with high speed tongues of rock to left and right the eyes are everywhere. There! Below! He spots it now – flat open rock that, once the wheels have touched upon, turned out to be a bog and dreams of Eldorado evaporate to add more substance to the fog. All survive and look around then to the sound of thunder Jimmy turns and spots it, maps it, names it; becomes a living legend. But how to find the way home when jungle dark and dangerous around them is the wrong jungle? River that flowed past them where they stood they must follow. Hollow must have been their dreams of gold when flow cascaded three-thousand feet to the path they must now tread. Dread the cliff and dread the fall yet cling and climb and hope and pray and say, ‘To Hell with dreams of gold!’ and leave it to the Devil and his canyon.
This photo snapped by my old friend, Rita Hardwick, on her first holiday abroad. She was terrified of flying. The pilot of the Dornier 288 flew low across the mountain top, then when he got to the edge of Angel Falls, he went into a nose dive and flew vertical down the falls. She snapped this as he levelled out. Angel Falls is 3,250ft high. She is no longer afraid of flying. |
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