Two Haikus

little miss serendipity [<18] · [Thu May 12, 2005 6:45 pm] -

love these- funny and strange at the same time
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Jenny Darling · [Thu May 12, 2005 10:41 pm] **Hai just love it!**

I share your love of haiku too, Nonny. A good discipline, paring down the words to fit the medium.
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Finbarr · [Thu May 12, 2005 11:48 pm]

Haiku amaze me sometimes, I love the good ones and the first of these is definitely one of those.

And from the man:

You brought me a flame,
I offered you a pencil,
But there was no lead. Crying or Very sad

Mmagic · [Tue May 17, 2005 7:04 pm]

and

at Finbarr!

Andrew

mad lemur · [Mon May 01, 2006 10:37 pm]

I love them too!

Now you must go over to the Haiku thread and write one.

The first one reminded me of the tale of the man and his wife who had no money to buy each other a Christmas present. He bought her a tortoiseshell hair clasp so she could tie back her locks and she bought him a silver chain so he could attach his fob watch to his waistcoat.

But she had her hair cut and sold it and he pawned his watch. How sad...

Really good, anony.

Glad I mooched through your box.
Shocked

Hazel
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Two Haikus Outline: I just love doing these! I brought you a flame You offered me a candle But there was no wick. Do I look like that? Five million pixels can’t lie But they can mislead.