Sex on Sunday morning

Finbarr · [Thu May 12, 2005 10:24 am]

A very well captured moment, perfectly paced. I wonder if it would have had even more effect if the you had used the outline as the title and called it Thought for the Day.

Roy · [Thu May 12, 2005 10:42 am]

Evading 'the issue' and living for the moment. This stirs up all kinds of questions about right and wrong, honesty and deceit, etc, if we want it too. Or we can evade the issue and see it as a moment lived, conscience-free. I suspect you intended the ambiguity. Or maybe it's just me Smile

_________________
Roy

www.royeveritt.com

KieranJay · [Thu May 12, 2005 2:47 pm]

Good to see I'm not the only one who listens to Ten Commandments FM on sunday mornings hmm, at least there isn't a 'Thou shalt not have another lie in' commandment or I'd be doomed. That said, the rules are there to be broken and Church is horribly out of fashion these days. I think Roy might be right about the ambiguity.

Kieran

Anonymouse · [Thu May 12, 2005 6:32 pm]

Thanks for your comments, guys.
Yes, I did think about calling it "Thought for the Day", Finnbar: it is slightly more subtle!
And ambiguity was my aim, Roy and KJ!

Anony
_________________
"We are such stuff as dreams are made on
And our little life is rounded with a sleep!"
WS

strayshift · [Fri May 13, 2005 10:38 am]

A lovely little piece Anon, can only suggest you unplug in advance next time. Very Happy

PenJen · [Sat May 14, 2005 6:09 am]

Mmagic · [Tue May 17, 2005 3:41 pm]

Made me smile big time.

Talk about awkward interjections. But overcome, happily.

Thanks for that, Anony!

Andrew

Scribbler · [Wed Jun 08, 2005 4:42 pm]

It makes me think though, if it was me and the sex was that good, I wouldnt have even heard the radio!!! Embarassed

_________________
Need a new dog? Visit www.terrierrescue.co.uk

strayshift · [Wed Jun 08, 2005 6:02 pm]

Jen
What do I know about radios?
Nahnah

Who is online?

Proofreading and Copy-Editing

Sex on Sunday morning

MoreWriting - formerly known as Get Writing

Disclaimer

Poetry Showcase [Other]	Moderators for this section: Weaver, ochsterboxter, CadenzRime, Lingua Pura, ososment, carolynrn, Inker
Sex on Sunday morning Outline: Thought for the Day “Thou shalt not commit adultery.” We pause an instant in our love-making To consider this uncompromising directive. Then, turning off the radio alarm We continue.