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Maximum Minimalism


Outline: Trying to say it all in a nutshell.
Why: Because I said it to her last night.
Review: Any/all comments welcome.
Maximum Minimalism

I love you not
because you pour my drink.
I love you
because you make me think.

Logicus tracticus

[Mon May 28, 2007 4:14 pm]

Does what it says on the tin.....
or as they say up there in the land of the posh
bootiful
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BrianRobertNeal

[Mon May 28, 2007 4:17 pm] Watto Ron

Brief and to the point.

Brian

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Carson

[Mon May 28, 2007 4:22 pm]

Says it all really, Ron. "In a nutshell" indeed. It's so concise and dare I say (for want of a better word) simplistic yet there's something very vast and profound just below the surface. S'what love is, what makes us tick I guess.

Makes you think.

Tim

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Ron

[Mon May 28, 2007 4:39 pm]

Cheers B Very Happy

Aye, lad, and the new stand is posh indeed. Wink

Funny story about Barry Fry here, ex-Chairman/owner/manager until a short while ago. After a particularly bad run of results, he came on Look East and live on camera said, 'I'm the Chairman here, and if any manager had had the results I've had lately, I would have sacked him. So I walked into my own office and sacked myself!'

Laughing Laughing Laughing

Thanks for what you said. Wink

..............

Brian,

Hi, buddy, thanks for dropping by again and for what you said. Cheers

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Yep, Tim, if love of another person seems difficult, one or both are doing it wrong. Wink

Cheers, good buddy. Cheers
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". . . and in the end the love you take is equal to the love you make." - The Beatles
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Ron

[Mon May 28, 2007 4:44 pm]

PS, B: there's a pub on London Road as you head towards the ground called Port Out Starboard Home - from the original definition - and it's on your left as you go to the match and on your right coming home. Wink
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maipenrai

[Tue May 29, 2007 10:33 am]

Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
good un
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whatever makes a soldier cry
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Ron

[Tue May 29, 2007 11:25 am]

Here's looking at you back, mate. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

Cheers
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Jack

[Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:14 am]

This is the wrong way round for me!
Good one!
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Ron

[Sat Jun 02, 2007 12:07 pm]

Laughing Laughing Laughing

Cheers

Laughing
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Steve Mann

[Sun Jun 10, 2007 2:47 pm]

thanks Ron - love it - as the man Will said "brevity is the soul of wit"

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Ron

[Sun Jun 10, 2007 3:09 pm]

Hello, Steve, very pleased to meet you. Cool

Glad you liked this. Wink

Thanks for the invite - see you on your piece very soon.

All the best,

Cheers

Ron
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