Sundowner

carrieann · [Mon May 02, 2005 12:22 am]

I don't know what else to say about this, but I found it clever and appealing. Well written.

aliqot · [Mon May 02, 2005 10:03 am]

Intriguing comparing the sun's rays (as seen from behind clouds, like a William Blake painting?) with the image of searchlights and so different in their effects. Peace and war and an evening drink all in one. Remarkable.

Alison

Ron · [Mon May 02, 2005 1:05 pm]

Why... thank ye kindly, carrieann and Alison,

What can I say? ...except Wink

...that's how He does it, you know... He scans the world looking for liars... He's got a good clear-up rate, as well... so I've been told Wink

Love

Ron

PenJen · [Tue May 03, 2005 7:57 am]

Ron · [Tue May 03, 2005 10:45 am]

Cheers, Jen,

If I kiss yer an tell yer I love ya, will that do?

Nice here, eh?

Glad you liked it. Sunday evening the sunset was magical over East Anglia. Hope it painted the Emerald Isle in equal beauty.

Ciao,

Ron

Mmagic · [Wed May 04, 2005 5:53 pm]

Clever, concise, touching and true.

Does exactly what it says on the tin.

Thanks, Ron.

Andrew

Ron · [Wed May 04, 2005 5:56 pm]

You're welcome, A,

Wink

BrianRobertNeal · [Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:39 pm] **Watto Ron,**

I like sparse and open so I like this one.

Interesting names on the thread particularly Aliqot.

Brian

The reviewer would appreciate your comments on: Cynicism

Ron · [Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:59 pm]

Aye, Brian, 'less is more' as the old maxim goes. You're a bit of a master at it in your own right. And the names above are really hot poets as well as having interesting handles. Wink

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Sundowner Outline: Try one! Sunbeam searchlights scanning sacred skies ‘No enemies sighted!’ Gin ‘n’ tonic Sundowner talking without lies ‘No lives blighted!’