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Rain is forecast


Outline: It seems a pity we don't usually see the positive aspects of rain. Inspired by Cul-de-Sac who would like a bit!
“Rain is forecast for the foreseeable future.”

We shall peer through spattered windows
at the grey-white sky
dumping its load into our day
and say “Bloody raining again!”

All dismal, dripping, dank and dark:
A wet and whinging walk
Or windscreen wipers whipping back and forth
Or squashed in steaming busses.

A wave of discontent and rivers rise
Sending the ducks to float across the paths
And water seeping into our nests
Through leaky roofs and under doors.

Further afield the harvests fail
and famine claims the weak and parched
and all is dry and cracking open.
“Send us your rain!”

What can we do? Rejoice at all our moisture?
Welcome wetness and delight in damp?
We can at least be generous and say:
“Please have some!”

Logicus tracticus

[Tue Dec 19, 2006 10:14 pm]

May I suggest slight revision
Windscreen wipers whipping back and forth
Squish squashed splat in steaming busses.


Lucky Anonymouse could be worse be raining cats and dogs, not good for meeces that. Enjoyed this
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Cul-De-Sac

[Wed Dec 20, 2006 12:26 am]

What a lovely thought Nony, how we would love to hear a forecast such as this.
Quote:
“Rain is forecast for the foreseeable future.”


Some experts are now calling it a once in a thousand year drought and the outlook just gets bleaker and bleaker.

Like the ducks floating over the paths bit, great mind picture that.
Water restrictions are becoming the norm through out the land and some reasonable sized towns (5 to 10 thousand people) have a completely dried up water supply and now are reliant on water trucked in daily to survive and washing day comes once a week only and only for two hours may you use a washing machine or tap. Not that bad in major cities yet but with Sydney now down to less than 35% Dam capacity it may well be on the cards in the future.

Thanks for the thoughts Nony.
Cheers Cul.
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outofthisearth

[Wed Dec 20, 2006 9:26 am]

Loved the picture of the UK under a low front and how we react to damp and rain constrated at the last minute by how others in the world view rainfall.

Ever the thoughful one Nony.

Kev
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Ian Gould

[Wed Dec 20, 2006 10:24 am]

Made me laugh, especially the last verse, which is a gem.
Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
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CadenzRime

[Wed Dec 20, 2006 2:33 pm]

I could arrange a house swap with Cul if rains whats wanted, plenty of it too. Laughing
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Robb Hinge

[Thu Dec 21, 2006 8:00 am]

Suffering from rust and webbed feet as we do here in West Wales, (and now in common with most of the rest of the country frost and dense fog) life is not a bowl of cherries, especially as most of us HAVE to go out and fight our way round the shops! Very timely reminder of uneven distribution of rainfall around the world. I enjoyed this!



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Anonymouse

[Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:49 pm]

Thanks, friends, for your comments. I was just struck when Cul was talking about the draught he is experiencing, how most of us here just moan about wet weather and the inconvenience it causes!
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