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Golden Days

Outline: A 4-Word challenge by Robb Hinge on Spiderbaby's Free Poetry site. The words were 'Autumn', 'leaves', 'smoke' and 'evening'. Why not pop over and leave a poem.
Golden Days

The golden lake reflects a day
In shimmering hues of Harvest Time
And Autumn trees begin to sway
To lay a carpet, bold, sublime

That crunches softly underfoot
In patterns of the infinite
And woodsmoke spirals gently up
To crimson sky, warm, passionate.



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MummyPenguin
[Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:47 pm]
Hi Roy
I read this with great pleasure since it is about my favourite time of the year. And the soundtrack in my mind was, of course, David Bowie! Very Happy Very Happy
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Ron
[Sun Sep 24, 2006 9:09 pm]
And don't forget Henry/Jane Fonda 'pond stuff' while you're singing, eh? Wink

Thanks for singin', MP. Very Happy

Cheers

Love,

'Ron' Wink Laughing
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Ian Gould
[Wed Sep 27, 2006 12:36 pm]
Very easy read. Comforting, warm and of the season. One to recite as Summer bows its head and waves from a distance.
Enjoyed
Ian
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Logicus tracticus
[Wed Sep 27, 2006 12:50 pm]
Me thinks MP needs more vegitables with her fish fingers, or less sauce Wink
Yes RonY good one, like a indian summer dont last long enough.
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Ron
[Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:27 pm]
Cheers Ian and Log, my good friends.

I enjoyed writing it, but I enjoy your pleasure of it much, much, more.

Thanks for the smile on my face. Very Happy Cheers

Nowt rong wi' fishfingers' crit. Wink Laughing
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MummyPenguin
[Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:04 pm]
Sorry but is someone suggesting that I have to eat stuff that is good for me? Yuk - the fish diet is bad enuf!!"! Laughing Laughing
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Ron
[Thu Sep 28, 2006 9:29 pm]
School of fish

Run
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