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Author: Anonymouse
Started: 10/05/06
Last Edited: 10/05/06
Published: 10/05/06
Revision: 1
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Spent PassionOutline: Another sonnet rising like a phoenix - but still not too cheerful! My heart is lying quietly in the shade.
Pass quickly by and do not stop to stare. As broken hearts are seldom on parade It could be that you will see nothing there. This heart once with a violent passion burned, Its alchemy fuelled with a flame so bright, That everything into pure gold was turned, Consuming every other feeling quite. But then the air it breathed was drawn away, And weak flames were unable to revive This blackened core that charred and smouldering lay. And my poor heart gave up the will to live. If your sweet breathe could kindle but a spark My heart’s new night would still prefer the dark. |
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